Mark so far

There is proficient research into similar products and a potential target audience.
There is excellent organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props.
There is proficient work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding.
There is a good level of care in the presentation of the research and planning.
Time management is good.

Overall - 13/20 Level 3

Targets:
More work needed on audience profile. Compile questionnaires to poll the interest of your target audience. Look at the Pearl and Dean website for help with audience profiling (see Therfield Media blog for link).
Ensure your video diary is kept up-to-date. Every lesson should be accounted for on this blog - make sure you are constantly updating what you have done.